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Morning into Night
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:24:01 PM in AEST
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I awoke one morning to it
The obvious, painful truth that
(you are killing me)
You are, simply and sweetly, in love.
Wrapping yourself around me
(and suffocating me)
Like a scarf tied too tight
Promises falling away, sadly
(it’s crushing me)
You think that this is enough
To sustain us, but it is
(torture for me)
Nothing more than hollow
Stupid conversations that will
(tear me apart)
Fill you up but leave me wanting
Until I run off into the night
(you are killing me)
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2004-05-16 14:24:01]
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Re: Morning into Night
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:19:52 PM AEST
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Love the way you did this! It's awesome!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Morning into Night
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:46:34 PM AEST
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somehow she wont realize i dont wanna talk to her
somehow i cant tell her i dont wann talk to her
she kills me but she keeps me alive its a messed up agreement she has with my heart
great job
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Re: Morning into Night
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:02:07 PM AEST
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wonderful! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Morning into Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:48:43 AM AEST
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Ohhhh brilliant! I could picture this perfectly, and the whispered words in the brackets. Very creative and, quite simply, beautiful.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Morning into Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:35:50 AM AEST
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Wow! Powerful. I can relate to this poem so much and you oh so much caught the emotion in this one.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Morning into Night
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 10:32:47 AM AEST
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This reminds me of living a life in silent desperation. Suffocating from a relationship that does not reach the desired (the essential) depth, but runs aground on the immutable sand bar of life. I think many of us can relate to this feeling. Beautiful write.
Butch |
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