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Used
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:15:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Used, a word reminiscent of my life.
Never good enough for anyone, merely a pawn.
Flying away to unknown places, my dreams of old.
Had you looked into my eyes long ago
Innocence and vision is what you would see;
Now in its place, a deep pit of despair and anger.
Voices of the past haunt my sleep.
Strangest is, they provide comfort and courage,
Courage to speak my mind.
How long will it be I wonder,
How long before I return forever?
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2004-05-16 13:15:04]
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Re: Used
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:24:18 PM AEST
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| this is truly tragic, reminds me alot of my jaded life. Great write |
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Re: Used
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:00:14 AM AEST
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i agree very tragic, your writtings remind me of my work.
greatly done.
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Re: Used
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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yes i also agree very tragic...people always tend to use others for their own pleasure...when we finaly realize whats going on were in way to deep to bring ourselves out...many don't even learn from their mistakes...but they should...they should learn to see what lies in front of them more clearly since it already happened...we should keep that anger withen oursleves and be ready for the next time....check out my 2 poems one person and the one who observes....those have to do with watching others and learning...thats if you want to lol i'm not going to force you! :)
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