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Pandora's Box
Contributed by
jeanie
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Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:39:25 PM in AEST
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Pandora's Box
Can you see a lil deeper, under the crust of a silt?
I hope there are people left with this special skill
Splinters of life never go off
I wear them proudly, they're a sort of
Armour that keeps wrapping me inside
It's not a protection, neither hard shield
It's my record, an imprint that sealed
An espalier of strides I have behind
I've walked alot and in memoriam of that
Is dust on my shoes, sand on my hat
I won't rub away what I want to stay
They can't say I'm dirty
I'm full of memories
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-05-16 12:39:25]
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:49:05 PM AEST
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| If you're talking about mistakes...(are you?) they are how we learn as we walk life's dusty road. How else will we learn....(scratching head?) Well done by the way. |
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:56:39 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this, good write, well made |
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by jeanie on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:00:10 PM AEST
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no, it wasn't about mistakes at all, rather about the opposite thing ;)
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Re: Pandora's Box
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by Nate on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:13:23 PM AEST
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i liked it. . . .its like confusing but right there in front of you . . .i like it . .. . makes alot of sense especially if you have read my poetry .. ...good write
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