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Words of an unfocused mind

Contributed by rhei76 on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



My lady is widowed
Her husdan so cold
As i start to stinch
The hollow heat stretches by the inch

My darling, My darling
I'm sorry
I thought i was trying
But dying, dying was something that was there
I didn't want it, it just wanted me
____________________________________

My lady is sad
So mangled and mad
Twisted apathy in a bag
I'm so sorry
I'm glad, I'm sorry

I swear I am glad you are happy
I wish you weren't so sad
If there was anything
There will be again
But if not, you will forever linger
____________________________________

I hope he's a dumb ***
I know you are okay
And i'm still dead
You just stay
I'll clean my head

Love I loved you & that love loved to stay
Like that love of the muse
In the summer evening
with the cool stars glow
Whence in dreams on swing in our teens

BOOM

BOOMBOOM

think something better
something bigger
A show
Some over beligerance
Under intoxic with lime

Every body happy
No ego exist
We are just playing
Playing guitars and drums
And other ****

I love it
I love I died
DEAD
And made it here
I finally get to wash off the blood

So close now
One hundred and eighty minutes
With damage pride
Selfish with the knowledge of
The sick boys tossing black beads





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Re: Words of an unfocused mind (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:28:04 PM AEST
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Strange poem, out of the ordinary. I like it top marks.


bernard.


Re: Words of an unfocused mind (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 07:48:29 PM AEST
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I'm With Bernard Strange But Written So Well !!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
LoVe - AnGeL




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