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I Really Did, I Really Do, Love You
Contributed by
XxPerfectlySanexX
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:49:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm sorry I hurt you,
In everything I say and do,
I'm trying my hardest to change stuff,
But still all I get from you is jsut a big huff,
We were holding on to nothing but depression,
I think we've both learnt what's called a "Valuble Lesson",
We talked about our future and things to come,
But after a while our hearts just went numb,
We stopped caring and bothering to,
But I have to say; I really did, I really do, Love you.
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XxPerfectlySanexX
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2004-05-16 05:49:53]
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Re: I Really Did, I Really Do, Love You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:05:57 AM AEST
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wow i thought this poem was great!!!
it shows that you are sorry but still manages to portray the idea that you still love your ex and are still loyal to him/her.
i think at the end, the little twist was done very creatively and in no way awkwardly...
inspiring write!!!
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Re: I Really Did, I Really Do, Love You
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by lindsaylootoo on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:58:59 PM AEST
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hey that poem was great it touched my heart in so many ways i have been trying to let things go with one of my ex's and i can get his face and vocie out of my head its hard and related to me so much
if you need a friends i am here to talk
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