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Mystery
Contributed by
XxPerfectlySanexX
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:37:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Far away where no one can see,
Is that mystery place where we are set free,
Happiness comes while sadness ends,
Finally my broken heart mends,
Just clouds and sky,
Up above way up high,
Everyone wonders what it will be like,
What it will feel like,
Are you really set free?,
Or is it our minds making up some crazy fantasy?
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2004-05-16 05:37:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mystery
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:08:32 AM AEST (User
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again, an excellent write.
the flow was exceptional ad it made me smile...
i also found it provoked a lot of feeligs ad keeps you wondering about it afterwards...
brilliant write!
katie |
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