|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Echoing Corridor.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:24:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Long winding corridor.
Haunted echoes calling to me.
I’m runny through ever-lasting shadows.
Searching for the door, to set me free.
I hear whispers beside me.
I feel death brushing against my skin.
Noise booms through my head.
As more pain gets sucked within.
My heart is thudding.
My breath, tight.
My cheeks feel on fire.
My soul rising to the night.
I want to escape this dark world.
Get out alive.
Ghosts are chasing me.
Haunting, me.
Until I don’t want to survive.
I don’t want to give in.
But I find I can’t stay here.
I stop, still, in my tracks.
Down my cheek runs a tear.
The monsters stop in front of me.
Eyes whitened,
Full of fear.
The droplet splashes on the floor.
The darkness disappears.
For something pure,
Can beat the shadows.
Something strong,
Can open windows.
And living things rise from this.
And golden rays,
Send a warm kiss.
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-05-16 05:24:15] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Echoing Corridor.
(User Rating: 1 ) by JT on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:43:21 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great write. I've been there. But how do I get to the window....
keep the words coming
jt |
|
|
Re: Echoing Corridor.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:23:45 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Theres a warm darkness in this, sent shivers up my back.very descriptive.i sense youre good at that x |
|
|
Re: Echoing Corridor.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great images, a wonderful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
|