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Battling The Emotion.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:03:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Happiness filled my darkened soul.
It was good! I was laughing, and I felt almost whole.
There were little/big kids rolling, round on their skates.
Or sitting at the tables. Chatting to their mates.
There were adult round too,
I didn’t mind that.
There was even a girl from school.
And, she gave me “no crap!!”
Music was played in this hall, type room.
Mixed with the chatter, every thing boomed.
The staff were kind.
Laura was great!
But she was friendly and sociable,
Some thing I ain’t!
I tried to fit in.
I think I got there.
Laura’s really kind,
And she actually cares!!
She said she’ll be here.
She said she’ll help me!
But darkness still lives,
So mixed emotions cover me…
One day I’ll get there,
With the help of my friends.
But until that day,
The mixed sh** doesn’t end!!
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deathdrop
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2004-05-16 04:03:00]
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Re: Battling The Emotion.
(User Rating: 1 )
by JT on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 07:58:31 AM AEST
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| this really flows. Dedicated, the light in the darkness. Nice |
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Re: Battling The Emotion.
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:20:19 PM AEST
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| this is really deep, You must be really hurting.x |
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