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That place inside
Contributed by
jt
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Listening to the voices
Whispering in your mind
Do you listen or take heed
What is it you will find
Tales of forgotten thoughts
Pushed back where no one goes
Of hurt and sad and some of shame
A pain that no one knows
Hiding from your own face
Covering all the lies
Caught in this living madness
Seeing through shut eyes
Hearing silent voices
Fearing silent cries
Hold on to the hoping
Your broken wings will fly
Disturbances within
Tearing at your soul
Caught inside the nightmare
Devouring your whole
Existence is uncertain
Reality dissolves
Something here is empty
The pain yet to unfold.
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jt
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2004-05-16 01:28:27]
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Re: That place inside
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:53:49 AM AEST
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hey this is realy good... i kno how you feel.. ive been there myself
kimmy |
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Re: That place inside
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:58:45 AM AEST
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| I like it. Your style is similar to mine. |
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Re: That place inside
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:53:37 AM AEST
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| i know this feeling as wel. you've expressed how i feel really well. its really good. |
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Re: That place inside
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by luckycharm on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:09:35 AM AEST
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| I like your poem. I understand where you are coming from and keep writing!!!. |
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Re: That place inside
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:11:34 AM AEST
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this is excellent, beautiful expression of feelings and very strong beginning, drew me right in and was over before i knew it, hugs n' love nessa
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