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The other half of me
Contributed by
Missy_7290
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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All of my life I have just been one part,
I was always one half, with a lonely heart,
But finally I know what was missing me in me,
Was the other half of my soul, now that I can see.
When you came into my life, with care, honesty, and trust,
In no time you made me see, a smile is a must!
You let me bear my soul, and all of my pain,
And through all of it, you loved me the same.
When you have troubles, and pain of your own,
You talk, I listen, our friendship has grown.
Now we tease, we laugh, and always seem to find,
That together we share, a special peace of mind.
Sometimes when we talk, or are just having fun,
Our words are the same, in complete unison.
Then we say to each other, it must be ESP,
But it's a close bond, a fact both of us can see.
My love you're a blessing, who's made my life whole,
You balance my heart, returning your faith is my goal.
You're one in a million, and I'm most proud to say,
I'll be here for you always, Forever and a Day.
Copyright ©
Missy_7290
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2004-05-15 23:56:22]
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Re: The other half of me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:07:28 AM AEST
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| very pretty, may you always have love in your life, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The other half of me
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:33:29 PM AEST
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| this flowed very nicely... i like it... its cute... and enjoyable... |
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Re: The other half of me
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by SweetRhythm on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 04:24:12 PM AEST
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Well well that was truly refreshing and delightful, so gracefully writen. Remarkable, your feelings are to be envied. Lovely,
Thanks for sharing your spirit.
Corinna ( FlawlessDumy) |
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