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Malicious Intent
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:30:12 PM in AEST
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My head is in my hands
After I detached it from my neck
Because malicious intent feels better,
Than hands raised in silent supplication,
Vain words packed with lies,
Or my face rotting with sorrow, ever could,
Eyes closed to block out the pain
Since the uselessness of life
Seeps in and chills me to my marrow
I try to escape by candlelight
As the moonlight casts its bloodied glow upon me
To frame my shoulders heaving with despair
As my sheets become soaked with tears
And dark thoughts that make me comprehend my hands
That drip with uselessness and unflagging regret
As I lament and strive to end what I hate,
But this burden I am forced to carry
Beneath my broken, blood-stained shoulders
As I am forced to plod
These endless, aching miles
Waking to the dull glow of dawn
Arms loaded with lies and cradling confusion
Voices swirling around me with malicious intent
Tears freezing and staining my wind-whipped face
Joy does not frequent this disgusted face
As I peer through the fog of my discontent
Discerning Death from afar
And her pale hand raised in salutation
Even as breath departs from my lips
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2004-05-15 22:30:12]
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:36:39 PM AEST
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Joel,
this isnt another dumb write as none of your writes are nothing more than brilliant. This is incredible but so damn sad!! I do care so there!!
Michelle |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:42:38 PM AEST
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*jaw drops in wonder*
WHAT are you talking about?!?!
this is such an amaaaazing poem you won't believe how much i loved it.
how can you say that it's useless?
or that YOUR useless?
no-one in this world is useless.
everyone plays a part, a role, on our planet.
i'm sure a lot of people care about you, I for one, even though i don't really know you, but i still care...
know that joel.
pm me if you ever wanna talk...
just hang in there ok?
13 year old girl concerned about the number of poets here who think that they're useless when they have so much talent sparkling around for everyone to see,
love,
katie |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by Esther on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:12:32 PM AEST
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well sombody is wrong here... i think yur poem was great and nobody is a useless person-including you-look at the good in yur life-im sure you can find some!!
hang in there
-esther |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by thumper on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:14:23 PM AEST
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This an excellent write!! I look forward to reading your poetry. I hope you don't mind if I copy this for my personal collection. Please, keep on writing.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 05:50:09 AM AEST
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| awsome write!!! i enjoyed it immensely!! Keep em coming ~delusions~ |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:25:36 PM AEST
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Joel this is incredible, it surely has to be one of your best.. full of emotion and beautiful imagery.. great stuff.. don't ever think you're useless or that no-one cares.. a wonderful poet such as you could never be useless..
char xxx |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:39:37 PM AEST
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This was an oddly beautiful write.
I loved every line man.
Excellent.
Glad to see you back and writing.
:) |
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Re: Malicious Intent
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:00:16 AM AEST
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| sooo beautiful... |
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