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Untited #3
Contributed by
Kore
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:17:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This gift I give to you,
Hoping you will take it,
It took a lot to do,
So I hope you will not break it.
I've done the best I can,
To give you this rare treasure,
Keep it close in hand,
So it can last forever.
If you look in me,
You will find all I have given,
And then you can see,
Why each moment with you is heaven.
So now a piece of me you own,
But this piece a major part,
Because without it I'm alone,
Alone without a heart.
Copyright ©
Kore
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2004-05-15 22:17:20]
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Re: Untited #3
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:48:03 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write.
The Voice
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Re: Untited #3
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST
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This is really lovely, Kore...welcome to YPDC....
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Re: Untited #3
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:25:53 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good Kore !!!! Very Enjoyable Read :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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