|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Icy Snow
Contributed by
mysticaldancer
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
|
He started out in isolation,
Caring for those he loved
Now he faces being alone,
Scared of what he will become
In a reach for companionship
He finds someone he thinks he?ll love
But years go by with her
And he still feels alone
All at once a new face appears
Lively, young, and beautiful
Perhaps this companion
will bring him back to life
With dances and walks in the night
His life is exciting again
But a hitch in the plans
Will come as a shock
Unable to figure out what to do,
As the new face is leaving
In a spontaneous decision
He throws his life away
On the icy snow
Copyright ©
mysticaldancer
... [
2004-05-15 21:57:45]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Icy Snow
(User Rating: 1 )
by UnfallenTears on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:59:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Meg I liked this one. I liked that you did it in free verse. This is the one for the book Ethan Frome... right? Must be... pretty good, Meg, keep it up |
|
|
Re: Icy Snow
(User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:50:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
sad
thanks for sharing |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
