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Gilded Age
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:33:12 PM in AEST
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Gilded was the word
Made me laugh
Howl with censure
How apropos
Indignant moniker
Life’s full of surprises
But never the lottery
Riske and rotten
Numbering askew
Tied one on
And then another
Stacked up
Chronological order
Debatable
Quantity versus quality
Reclining or declining years
Never quite clear
Have another
One more for the road
Depleted
Conversation
Stalled in low gear
What about the weather
Yes it’s raining again
Taxi?
Yes, thank you
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Copyright ©
merry
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:04:17 PM AEST (User
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I like this style quite witty I must say
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:39:28 AM AEST (User
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A really new way to present a poem I like the shortness of the lines it makes good reading too.
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:53:03 AM AEST (User
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lol, gaille its 3am now and as i was logging off i saw this, clever, wonderful and delightful as always and sooooooo cute lmao! hugs n' loves ya, nessa
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:38:25 PM AEST (User
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I Like The Style In This Wonderful Write
You Have Written This One Really Well !!!!!
Keep Em Coming :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: Gilded Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:50:39 AM AEST (User
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A little different for you, but I can still relate. The feeling is all too real.
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