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Articulate
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:15:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ultimately alone
Tired of the act
They keep taking
Bits and pieces
Feeding
A beggars banquet
Swatting them away
Too much effort
Eyes glaze over
Dreams turn gray
Deserted by those
Who promised to stay
Aching over losses
Bones broken
Reminders of pain
Keep love alive
Indecent behavior
Havoc on the rise
Background noise
Insufficient tears
Mimic the words
Recycled emotions
Give it away
Hold on for dear life
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Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-15 20:15:47]
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Re: Articulate
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by morelikelyrics on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:35:03 PM AEST
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I love the simple phrases, all glued together to portray a touching story... Just wonderful, amazing, on and on...
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Re: Articulate
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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Everything you write turns to gold. I eagerly await your next creation.
Stitch |
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Re: Articulate
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by thumper on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:03:55 AM AEST
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| Wow!! So few words and such great meaning! You have put into words the last few months of my life. The last few months of my gram's life, she was only sleeping in cat-naps, an hour or two at a time. So I was only sleeping as much,since I am raising 3 granchildren. I got no help from my 2 daughters and I felt like the world was on my shoulders. "Deserted by those who promised to stay" and " Insuffient tears" are very descriptive of my struggle. "Indecent behavoir" rings a bell too. Excellent write! Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Articulate
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:25:04 AM AEST
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ditto, hugs n' love nessa
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