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Untitled #2
Contributed by
Kore
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:13:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is not a tear, my love,
it is just the rain,
I knew that this day would come
but I cannot stop the pain.
This is not a tear, my love,
it is just the rain,
I am happy that you found someone,
so a smile I must maintain.
That is not my heart, my love,
lying shattered on the floor,
that is just a toy you broke,
that you no longer have a use for.
That is not my heart, my love,
lying shattered on the floor,
it is just an empty shell,
where love will grow no more.
So if you'll excuse me my love,
while I crawl away,
it hurts too much to see your face,
it hurts too much to stay.
So if you'll excuse me my love,
while I crawl away,
all the color has left my world,
and everything is grey.
But this is not a tear, my love,
the rain is what it is,
and even though it isn't raining,
we'll pretend it is.
Copyright ©
Kore
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2004-05-15 20:13:04]
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Re: Untitled #2
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:46:36 PM AEST
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this is a real heart tugger. makes one want to run for a tissue. great piece of writing.
the voice
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Re: Untitled #2
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:24:30 PM AEST
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Very Sad Heartfelt Write !!!!!!! Written Well
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Untitled #2
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 02:53:25 AM AEST
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Well done! The emotion is portrayed vividly, in a way that comes home to the reader. And I like the repetition style.
Keep it up!
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