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''A Self-Reflected Crime''

Contributed by amos on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

don't ever recall the regression
you have a willful disease I expose
your common conception is something that can't exist
not curable and not communicable
every place we see grows without maturity
does it matter?
..that I don't want your disease
any time we talk
...you spread it out
all we do is state at one another
no desire but a temptation to understand
what the hell goes on inside our heads
I don't like it, never cared much for the destruction
You grow without maturity and speak without thought
is it how we work that angers you
was it your olderselves who upset you
was it an education with worthless desire
WHAT WOULD YOU DO IF A GUN WAS PLACED IN YOUR MIND
DID YOU WANT TO EXECUTE ALL PURPOSE IN LIFE
I could never understand that concept
A difference between me and you...
a life thats half full and completely empty
an act of concieted depth with no issue
you squeeze my throat just to feel the beating of my heart
you did the deed
you did the crime
you shook the foundation and rattled my spine
Why would you ever agree to the hell you pay?
was it worth...
throwing it all away?
Was it something your crowded closet could never hold?
I never understood the death...
...inside your head
Was it all an illusion...
you ended your sole existance before I ever knew it?

Copyright © amos ... [ 2002-10-08 15:05:00]
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Re: ''A Self-Reflected Crime'' (User Rating: 1 )
by femme_fatale on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 08:51:51 AM AEST
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wow....

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