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Love Unseen
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:31:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Far far away in the depths of my mind
I wish I could have you
Of this you are blind
I built it up in time, through moments and through thoughts
Of what I have for you
Is something of great cost
Im sure its what you want
It's definatly what you need
This love I have for you
I really insist you take heed
So if you are not sure
And afraid of what to do
Then why not let me decide,
Simply whats best for you
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SweetRhythm
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2004-05-15 13:31:58]
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Re: Love Unseen
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:37:43 PM AEST
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wouldnt that be great if we could magically make someone love us, unfortunatly it doesnt work that way lol, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love Unseen
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:14:09 PM AEST
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| Great write. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Love Unseen
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by Missy_7290 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:02:53 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem i was so excited after i read this poem i hope you continue to write great poems.
Love,Missy |
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