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YOU LOSE
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:42:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You come like a thief in the night
Your victims can not even fight
For you come quietly
Creeping, silently
You have lost already but still you try
Your victims can only cry
Why do you try so hard?
But God can read you like a card
You have lost, we get to win
No more in the bondage of sin
You came like a thief in the night
But now we can fight
With our Lord the light
February 16th 2000
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Re: YOU LOSE
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:27:51 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this read lil_angel. You did a great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: YOU LOSE
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:52:37 PM AEST
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| nice transition and format. |
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Re: YOU LOSE
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by Shnannon on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:41:00 AM AEST
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| Normally, you know I hate rhyme, but you did it well. Great write! |
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