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Did you even care?
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:37:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Fire begins to rise in his eyes,
And then I begin to realize,
That I'm loving a fool,
Feels like I'm being abused,
The night gets so cold,
Still my heart can't unfold,
Cause the feeling hurts so bad,
Tell me what did I do to make you mad?,
I never did anything to hurt you,
Or anything to make you,
Not care about me,
Now I see,
A vision in my dream,
That you are going to forget me,
Rain beings to fall,
And you hear me call,
Out your name and there is no word,
From you and I know you heard,
A voice echoing so someone could get to your heart,
I still play the part,
But am I your lover or friend,
The story of us never ends,
So I need to know,
Did you even care?
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luckycharm
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2004-05-15 11:37:37]
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Re: Did you even care?
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by bernard on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:52:39 AM AEST
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Poem is alright but if you have to ask, Do you even care. Then obviously he doesn't. Look for another. Love is a special feeling for both man and women. It is strangely enough one of the most difficult things to explain. One is either in love or being loved. You will know when it is for real.
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Re: Did you even care?
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:56:40 AM AEST
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| This is great, and i care if it helps |
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Re: Did you even care?
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:12:34 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful sad sentiment.
I love your line
A voice echoing so someone could get to your heart
I still play the part
I hope the landslide came out alright. God bless you. |
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