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a prayer for help
Contributed by
shorty_52
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:51:24 AM in AEST
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drugabuse
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wise old woman
somewhere out there
i need you so much
for i'm in intensive care.
my eyes are all red
my chest is all brused
i have a broken leg
and i'm missing a tooth.
as i say this
in my prayer
tears roll down my cheeks
and it's to much for me to bare.
i close my eyes
she's standing right there
then she nodds her head
and there went my pain and dispare.
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Re: a prayer for help
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by krisseee on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:54:39 AM AEST
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today is a good day for quality.
I liked this one alot also......
good work |
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Re: a prayer for help
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by Princesaazul16 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:47:12 PM AEST
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| I thought you did a good job. I liked this poem a lot. Keep up the good work! If you ever need to talk..i'm here ~Stace~ |
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Re: a prayer for help
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:13:45 PM AEST
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| captured the feeling perfectly(hope it isn't real). good job and thanks for sharing. |
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