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fire
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:42:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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dancing
twisting
turning
burning
dancing when a breeze flows by,
twisting before i feeds,
turning so that u could see,
the glowing parts it brings.
orange and yellow
blue and red
burning and burnigh
hotter and brighter.
keeps your warm
on cold winter nights
could burn down a house
when lightning strikes.
the more u feed it
the hotter it gets
once it's big enough,
it needs more than sticks.
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2004-05-15 10:42:14]
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Re: fire
(User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:06:35 PM AEST
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i bet your friend was impressed huh? this was really good stuff. its unique and not like the rest, i enjoyed it.
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Re: fire
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by Heartfilledblood on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 01:47:48 PM AEST
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| This is real good :) I liked it a lot. Good write. |
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