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day-trip
Contributed by
krisseee
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:46:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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wanna take a day-trip into the depths of my mind?
dom't waste your money on the entrance fee, i'll tell you what you'd find,
pain and despair and hatred, so much so, you'd come out blind,
my sentence to a life time, of misery long ago signed.
so cross that day-trip off of your things to do list,
go to the seaside instead,eat fish and chips,get p.issed,
and by the time you come back, the angel of death i will have kissed,
and you can read in the obituary section of the local kid who slit his wrist..
Copyright ©
krisseee
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2004-05-15 09:46:07]
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Re: day-trip
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by krisseee on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:49:25 AM AEST
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if u wanna read more of my shi* then scroll down a few poems to one called "why????"
comments are cool, even if u hate it, actually, especially if u hate it..... |
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Re: day-trip
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by DirtyFool on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:32:01 AM AEST
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| Hey! i liked this poem. Very good and deep |
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Re: day-trip
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by lanz on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:19:03 AM AEST
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| very powerful.. i like the way you have told this poem, it's different |
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