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Stranger
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:49:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I was taken away from you,
You were so intoxicated, I doubt you knew,
I was put into care,
Because the responsibilities you didn’t want to share.
You were my pro-creator,
I never thought I would live to hate you,
Of you I am the spitting image,
Emotionally you’ve caused me damage.
I remember you kept my sister,
When you left her, did you miss her?
Why didn’t you take care of me?
I needed love,why couldn’t you see.
All you cared about was your next hit,
A mother , you weren’t fit,
It was your drug of choice that laid you to rest ,
You know what they say, a junkie knows best!!!
When you died I wanted to feel sorrow,
But as I stood there, I was just hollow,
You died at age twenty-seven,
That is no age to enter heaven.
The other thing you taught me in life,
Other than how to survive grief and strife,
Is that ***** you pumped into your arm,
Will cause so much raw, emotional harm.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-05-15 07:49:06]
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Re: Stranger
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:58:08 AM AEST
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Wow pixie,
this is heart breaking but written really well.
I can't imagene what that was like, altho I know some people that died too young because of drugs like meth, etc.
U have a great gift of writing and u have risen above this even tho painfjull.
Good work!
luv, huggs, peace,
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Re: Stranger
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:01:00 AM AEST
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Wow Pixie.....this is deeply moving... You are strong... I know you will survive this... Good write...
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Re: Stranger
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by krisseee on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:04:17 AM AEST
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strong stuff.
fcuking brilliantly written. |
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Re: Stranger
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:41:35 AM AEST
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I agree that this is a very strong write...well-done I might add.
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