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Before The Fall
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:10:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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they say pride
comes before the fall
who will be there
for you if there
is anyone at all
surely things can
not go on as they
have done all along
where tyrants reign
and justice is
merely feigned
don your armor and
prepare your swords
for the things i speak
are not merely words
i challenge you
to fight the war
the dawn is comming
and soon you will see
your crueltry will no
longer be endured
Copyright ©
faithmairee
... [
2004-05-15 06:10:19]
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Re: Before The Fall
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by SavingMarion on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:11:44 AM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: Before The Fall
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:18:27 AM AEST
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Yes, a powerful message, but do tell us more.
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Re: Before The Fall
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:01:39 AM AEST
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Wonderfull, powerfull, write!
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs,peace,
emy |
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Re: Before The Fall
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:19:23 PM AEST
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So many are paying for the pride and agendas of a few. So many lives lost, so many loves and beliefs desecrated. Yes, we will be the one to fight the battle they started. It is up to us to change the things wrong and right the mistakes if humanly possible.
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