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PLEASE DON'T LEAVE
Contributed by
twesten
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:24:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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PLEASE DON'T LEAVE
What bring's us to this point.
I never wanted it to be this way.
I loved you with all my heart,
Please don't leave me today.
I'm begging you for another start.
Please don't leave me this way.
You are all I have ever really known.
Please babydoll I dont want you to go.
I don't think I can handle being alone.
The pain I will feel,Deep within my soul.
I love you,I need you,I want you to stay,
please babygirl,dont leave me this way.
The thing's I did I can't take back.
Is there anyway I can get you to stay?
My mind at the time was on one track,
Please babydoll don't leave me this way.
T.West
Copyright ©
twesten
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2004-05-14 23:24:20]
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Re: PLEASE DON'T LEAVE
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by Shadow on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:39:29 PM AEST
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| For a poem it is very good. I like the rhyming and the way it is put. As for an apology i would reword it. Remember this though no matter how imposible it seems at the time their is always a way to right a wrong no matter what it is. If you choose to do so or don't do so it is up to you. The poem is great. Continue to wright. Notify me if there is a particular piece you want a comment on. |
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Re: PLEASE DON'T LEAVE
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:43:19 AM AEST
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your emotions run with this one well done
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