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Last Rights
Contributed by
creed
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:33:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sadness building up
Pain so intolerable
A life so pointless
With tears colored red
Dying to live
Living to die
Crying for love
Hiding my pain
I can't take the screaming anymore
People Crying
People dying
Never good enough
Always inferior
An unequal image
Too vile to look upon
Copyright ©
creed
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2004-05-14 21:33:27]
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Re: Last Rights
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by TaintedOptomist on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:36:05 AM AEST
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| good work love.....wow a poem i don't get the hidden meaning in..what is it? |
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Re: Last Rights
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by creed on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 12:42:31 PM AEST
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its about pain.
thats basically all its about. Oh and by the way, i'm grounded so I cant call you or anything. I'll see you in June though!!!!!!!!! |
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