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Diary Of A Soldier Part III
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:55:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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A faint smell of fear, memories trapped in a tear,
The past creeps in, I'm reminded of my sins,
The sun sets, I'm left alone with only my regrets,
The sky becomes dark, I feel an emptiness within my heart,
Pain becomes stronger, the healing takes longer,
I can't help but scream, cutting myself watching me bleed,
Turn away from the light of day,
Enter the relam of darkness, turning off all emotions becoming heartless,
Open the book to a new chapter, giving in to this rapture,
Leave my soul in seach of gold,
Listen to the voices, unable to fight off these forces,
Good -vs- evil, which is more conceivable,
Which side am I on, where do I belong,
Confused by both I chose not to vote,
I rather speak my mind then follow any of these swines,
I'm my own man, why can't people understand,
So I stand alone, while people protest outside my home,
I am who I am and that's all I can be, I fight for my country and help keep it free,
Which is worst, a beheaded man, or a naked picture of a woman?
Nether one is right, but both have happened in the mist of this fight,
We should punish the ones that did this, but back the soldiers whose family misses them,
Let the candles burn until each and every soldier has returned,
So welcome them home with open arms, and thank them for protecting you from harm.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2004-05-14 19:55:40]
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:46:28 PM AEST
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Sorta sad but very good... I haven't read the other parts but this one could easily stand alone.
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:01:30 PM AEST
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Another painful and touching write, Matt...
You write these with so much emotions, but I know you write from the heart....
Hugs always,
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:36:09 PM AEST
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great write. it comes from deep inside of you.
the voice
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:48:03 PM AEST
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matt you put yourself on the line in your career, and your heart and soul on the line, in your poetry, i honestly dont know how you do it but i am grateful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:43:56 PM AEST
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I pray for all of you to come home we support you but want you all back home with us where you belong. Im so sorry that these things are happening to you. Know that your in my thoughts and prayers Matt every single day!!
Michelle |
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by Shadow on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:49:52 PM AEST
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| Glory and honor friend. It *****es me off that i can't help in this. The pain for you all must be great. If i could i would gladly take the place of one of you though i'm sure i could never fill the shoes nor do i honor them. Honor them or not when my time comes i will join the cause. It's alway been my dream. God bless you all. Fight the good fight. with love and admoration: shadow. |
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Re: Diary Of A Soldier Part III
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:45:45 AM AEST
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You are duty bound.."Let the candles burn until each and every soldier has returned,
So welcome them home with open arms, and thank them for protecting you from harm"
sure..that is the duty of the people of your motherland.. venkat |
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