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Razorblade
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I slide the blade across my wrist
And for a moment I escape reality
Nothing can touch me
Except this pain I feel
But soon after
I drown in sorrow
Realizing what I have done
Who I have hurt
Knowing what they will think of me
But I am not the attention starved child
They say I am
I only do it because I can
What else is there to do?
I've givin up on my reason why
This action is a cry from inside
An aching heart longing to let go
But once again not able to let go
So.......
I continue to cut
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Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-14 19:05:16]
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Re: Razorblade
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by waos on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:20:19 PM AEST
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*hugs* good work there. I know what you feel like when you write that I think. At least the part where people accuse you of being attention seeking. That's one reason I hide my scars...so people realize that's not why I do it. We do it cause we can. And cause it helps.
Sweet job putting it into words. Keep it up. |
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Re: Razorblade
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by Lessa on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:30:01 PM AEST
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i understand this, i remember the feeling,
how u know u hurt other people doing it
but its like u have no choice
its that or dealing with the anxity and the panic
but u cant do that. cutting gets rid of it really fast so u can just move on, great write babe |
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Re: Razorblade
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by ilimow on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:31:12 PM AEST
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sober thoughts, so beautifully woven in emotions.
Liked your style.
Hoping its just a poem, not a reality.
regards
ilimow |
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Re: Razorblade
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:03:34 PM AEST
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I don't find it hard to understand at all, it's how you feel inside, and so you write, great job, sometimes you just got to let it out.
The Phantom |
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