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Mind Wandering
Contributed by
merry
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Venturing beyond that narrow space
Distance is no obstacle
Working up a sweat
Hormones jittery reaction to you
Eyes alert shooting sparks across the room
Wanting to taste the sweat on your neck
Lick my way across the desert
Mind wandering
Letting go
Keeping scraps of conversation under my pillow
Talking to you in my sleep
Your name rolls off my tongue
Dialogue of misguided souls
Pleasure burns holes in our skin too easily
Tormented by losses and unanswered questions
Shadow boxing
Dancing
Your tongue in my ear
Catch my breath before I let go
Mind wandering
Looking for you
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Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-14 18:49:10]
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Re: Mind Wandering
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:37:13 PM AEST
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seemed like a realistic fantasy to me! lol, are you day dreaming about viggo again gaille!? hehe, hugs n' loves ya sis, nessa
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Re: Mind Wandering
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:45:37 AM AEST
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sounds good to me!! Steamy go girl wooo hooo!!
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Re: Mind Wandering
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:47:53 AM AEST
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Think this, must be the peak of yer work - so close to reality ~ you just keep gettin' better~
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Re: Mind Wandering
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:02:40 PM AEST
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Your writes are always so fascinating...you venture such interesting places and your words are so full. Just love this.
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Re: Mind Wandering
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by Elena on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:42:16 AM AEST
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| Nice words, and a really good idea ! |
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