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I'm Fine. Really.
Contributed by
waos
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:46:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Are you okay?
Yeah. I'm fine.
*Slice. Rip. Tear.*
Can you hear it?
*Heat. Freeze. Hot. Cold.*
Can you feel it?
Yeah. I'm fine. Really.
It's so beautiful;
can you see it?
Trust me.
I'm fine now. Really.
It's the music that I dance to.
It's the violin I play;
my wrist is my string,
my knife the bow,
and the music my blood flow.
Trust me.
I'm fine.
Lock me up and see
just how fine.
Copyright ©
waos
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2004-05-14 18:46:17]
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Re: I'm Fine. Really.
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by Bloodthirsty on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:16:28 PM AEST
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| This is a VERY good poem!!! I know how you feel, nobody ever belives me when i tell them that im fine. Its amazing how well you put your feelings into words like that!!! U R AWSOME!!!!! |
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Re: I'm Fine. Really.
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by Lessa on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:33:00 PM AEST
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| very vivid, it maked u get shivers, almost creepy. nice write, i hope to hear happier ones someday from u darling |
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Re: I'm Fine. Really.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:37:57 PM AEST
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| I like it. Come to my website and join for free. |
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Re: I'm Fine. Really.
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by williamdye on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:39:41 PM AEST
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| oops, i forgot to sign in when I posted the above message! |
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