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Backroom
Contributed by
Winter_Mist2004
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:18:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Backroom
Here in my corner,
whispering in my head.
I wonder what they’ve said,
and I wonder can they see me?
Here in the backroom of my mind,
in my claustrophobic corner.
They might hear…
Time…
Slips away,
losing grip, might loose my footing and slip.
They might like that though,
laughing in my mind I hear them.
And I wonder what they say,
while I play with memories.
Here in the backroom of my mind,
sometimes I might glimpse.
A distant…
Shadow…
For an instant,
but I just smile and look away.
I don't understand what they say.
Why do they leave me here,
why don't they break this mirror.
And discover there is much to find.
Here inside my mind
And I wonder can they hear me,
Screaming...
Here in the backroom of my mind.
-Karen Noll
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Re: Backroom
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by waos on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:07:00 PM AEST
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| that is awesome. i really really liked it. i can see myself in it too and you did such a good job of expressin git all. it's hard to put on paper what goes on inside the mind. good work. |
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Re: Backroom
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by Lessa on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:43:24 PM AEST
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| very thought provoking and gives a lost for the imagination to truly see, nice write |
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Re: Backroom
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:22:13 PM AEST
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| .....alluring and dark. Beautifully written. Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. |
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Re: Backroom
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by Delusions on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:54:40 AM AEST
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| absoloutley great!!! i loved it!!! keep it up... quite chilling ~Delusions~ |
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Re: Backroom
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by Saitou-sama on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 09:29:27 PM AEST
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| Ooh... Paranoia. One of my favorite subjects. Great write. |
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