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You never loved me
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:04:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He made me feel like a fool,
Cause all the time I was loving him,
And he just pushed me away,
I keep crying for someone who don't even care,
For a girl like me,
He made me cry myself to sleep,
Cause I remember he looked at me,
And didn't say a word and,
It was like fire was in his eyes,
I couldn't move myself away,
Cause he still has apart of me,
And I can't seem to release my feelings,
I just can't let him go,
I don't know how to move on,
If all I can do is think about you,
When I look at you I feel like,
You hate me and tears,
Turn into deep rivers and seas,
But now I have to forget,
About you because you never loved me
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2004-05-14 17:04:05]
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Re: You never loved me
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:04:25 PM AEST
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Not bad, not bad at all . . . a very emotional, raw, pain-filled write that clearly stemmed from a painful situation and the computer screen almost bleeds with the captured and expressed pain. My sympathies for how you must be feeling and my compliments for this poem.
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Re: You never loved me
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by Winter_Mist2004 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:23:22 PM AEST
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Wow very deep. This reminds me of what my friend is going through. I showed her this poem and it made her feel like someone else out there goes through this. So thanks from both of us.
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