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Moonlit
Contributed by
merry
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Moonlit ancient paths
Silver sands conspire with glittering sea
You sing love songs to me
Or am I just imagining
Souls like ours
Could come across one another
Reflections in each other’s eyes
When pleasure seemed empty
And there was no one to fill it
You called my name, dared me to answer
Intriguing me to take one step closer
Make you smile up at the stars
Your fingers run through my hair
Picture worth a thousand words
Crafting each perfect scene
Silver and gold spilling over us
As bodies melt into one being
You have seen it in a dream
Hands caress with careful attention
Not to miss a single inch
Sweet oblivion is bliss
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merry
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2004-05-14 16:28:52]
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Re: Moonlit
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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sooo beautifully sensuous and romantic, *sigh.....* hugs n' love ya sis, nessa
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Re: Moonlit
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:48:10 PM AEST
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A delightful read.....
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Re: Moonlit
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 08:56:31 PM AEST
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I love every line of this except the one about a picture being worth a thousand words. Otherwise, it's perfection.
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Re: Moonlit
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by Elena on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:08:12 PM AEST
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Enchantingly beautiful.
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