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Inspiration,Motivation and Love
Contributed by
dying_angel
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:02:17 PM in AEST
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She sat there in that room
Talking like she knew me
Telling me to go
I was so lost in the see-through
Then he came and it was ok
He was there for me
All the time without a doubt
Telling me to stay and not flee
He was My inspiratin my motivation my love...
Dedicted to Will who went away to soon..
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2004-05-14 16:02:17]
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Re: Inspiration,Motivation and Love
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:13:30 PM AEST
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| this is really good, I liked what you were trying to say, and that makes it so sad... Keep up the gd work, welcome to YPDC |
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Re: Inspiration,Motivation and Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:52:16 PM AEST
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| Good job. I love the fact that your poetry says so much with so little. Your choice of words and use of them in context is something to be marveled. Most poets, including myself, will wonder eight miles around something to get to the point and seem poetic. You get there and come off smelling like a rose. GREAT JOB! |
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