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Kiss Me Blind
Contributed by
NirvanaLotus
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:12:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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kiss me so deeply that you become a part of me
kiss me so i cant see anything anymore
when our lips touch you hit my inner core
you are the thing that holds me to the world
with an embrace that makes my heart forever race
our hands fit like two peices of a puzzle
and each night that passes i can't imagine a different kiss goodbye
something so sweet has never come
and here you are rearanging my life
God and heaven this isn't ordinary
your kiss make's life's perception blurry
you are my licorice prince
and ever since that first kiss
you have fullfilled me with potency...
so please
kiss me so deeply that you become a part of me
kiss me so i cant see anything anymore
Copyright ©
NirvanaLotus
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2004-05-14 14:12:03]
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Re: Kiss Me Blind
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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| Well done, a beautiful poem. |
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Re: Kiss Me Blind
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by Spike on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:29:11 AM AEST
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A powerful, intimate but plaintive desire for the total sharing of the self with another - the surrender of self in the blessed union of souls.
The recycling of the opening lines to conclude give a lovely lyrical feel to the poem.
Once again, a very impressive write.
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Re: Kiss Me Blind
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by Sirena_Degana on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:01:02 PM AEST
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| LUSTFULLY PUT!!! if u understand my meaning.... |
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