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DEAR DEATH
Contributed by
taintedmind
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:24:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death you are my friend
Death you cant pretend
you won't let me touch you
even for just a moment
i want to see you face to face
i indulge in your beauty
i take you for my own
i sharpen the blade with a smooth rock
i stick it to my skin and look back
on the hate and the pain in my life
i can't go through with it
death you talked me down
death you aren't there
i want to die but you won't come get me
please end my pain
please end my LIFE
death come get me
death i need your presence
death you are my easy way out
Copyright ©
taintedmind
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2004-05-14 11:24:08]
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Re: DEAR DEATH
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:34:57 AM AEST
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SUCH AGONY OF THE SOUL-
SORRY THIS IS HOW YOU FEEL
I HOPE YOU FEEL DIFFERENTLY SOON
YET, SOMETIMES I FEEL AS YOU DO |
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Re: DEAR DEATH
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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I hope with all my heart that if you feel as you do that sucicide is not the way you choose to make your pain go away. Believe me it is not I know for experience. If you try and fail or get caught it is not fun at all and it makes you wonder what is worse not dying and just being stuck here with a bunch of people watching your every move or dying? Surround yourself with friends and family or people who you know that care about you. It sounds corny but it helps. If you ever you need someone to talk to send me a message. I will answer and be more than happy to talk to you.
Love~n~Hugs,
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Re: DEAR DEATH
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:49:43 AM AEST
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This was a very sad and it was honest.. I feel the same way sometimes too well like all the time.. death seems like the perfect answer.......
christina |
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