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23 Hour Swinger
Contributed by
ChristopherFriedrich
on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 AM in AEST
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She never met a man she didn't please
Her crooked smile gave your mind the disease
She inched it further, adding to the tease
For the money, she never would cease
She often pondered the worth of it all
Picking the role, was her user's call
She'd play a long, no matter what
Never a bruise, hardly a cut
Her pride had long since washed away
And her dignity was close to decay
She wanted to quit, but never could
If she got a chance, maybe she would
She longed for the silver screen,
Where maybe she'd be treated like a queen
Instead of a cast away sore
Who's life was happy no more
For an hour each day, she prayed
For him to come and take her away
But her only satisfaction
Came from the men with dollars of Jackson
Copyright ©
ChristopherFriedrich
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2002-10-08 09:15:00]
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 04:33:12 PM AEST
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your right you don't see poems about prostitutes often lol, but yours was an awesome write..seems like you have em' down pretty good...
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by herbleaf23 on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 06:47:06 PM AEST
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| this reminds me of my job. |
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
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THIS IS A REALLY GOOD WRITER.
Ali |
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:56:16 PM AEST
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| very interesting ... well written for sure.. great stuff |
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by Lady_Bubbles420 on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 05:20:56 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. Even though I don't often like poems with rhymn schemes, you pulled it off nicely. Good work! |
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Re: 23 Hour Swinger
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 09:21:25 AM AEST
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| Am I really old enough to read this? P.S. I'm in 8th grade. this is so disgusting, BUT IT RHYMES GOOD JOB!!!! |
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