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Forever Young
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:38:31 AM in AEST
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I know in time you will understand,
why this had to be,
then you can reach for my hand,
and we'll be forever free,
Although my life was not so long,
and thats hard for you to bare,
things in life sometimes go wrong,
and you think its not fare,
we will never have to say Good bye,
Just I'll see you once again,
Forever Young,in Heaven I'll fly,
for this is not my end,
All those memories I gave to you,
in just a short 20 years,
remebering them will help you through,
and bottle up all the tears,
I know now it doesnt seem clear,
and your left asking WHY?
An explanation why I cant be here,
Is just it was my time to die,
I'll be waiting to see you all once more,
so try not to cry for me,
soon we'll be together at Heavens door,
together for eternity.
Josh Rookstool
5-11-83 5-8-04
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LOWMAN613
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Re: Forever Young
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:48:57 AM AEST
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Oh Christina This Is Very Sad ... I'm So Sorry To Hear About Your Nephew's Friend !!!!!! Wow He Was So Young Like Me !!!!!!!
I'll Pray For The Family .....
*********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:53:23 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL- SO SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS |
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Re: Forever Young
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:38:58 AM AEST
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Such a short life, a real tragedy.
I had a cousin who passed away at only 19 so I can identify with this one. |
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Re: Forever Young
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:26:47 PM AEST
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What a horrible thing to happen so young. This is a beautiful poem. We must wonder what God's plan is to take him so young. He takes the best of the best you know. I am sorry for such a loss in your lives. God bless and give you understanding and love.
Rita |
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Re: Forever Young
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:09:54 PM AEST
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Bless your heart! I am so sorry . I lost a cousin to cancer when she was only nine. Nothing is worse than going to a funeral of one who is young or in their early twenties for they still have a whole lifetime ahead of them to live. God Bless you and your family.
love~n~hugs
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Re: Forever Young
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:29:14 PM AEST
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Oh! It's so sad when I young person dies... I wish I had had someone thoughtful write a peom like this at my cousin's wedding... I might have gotten over my grief...
You are such an amazing person, Christina!
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Re: Forever Young
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:54:30 PM AEST
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Need some Kleenex here.... this is heartbreaking...as always when a young person dies..... Great write, Christina..
Jenni |
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Re: Forever Young
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:57:51 PM AEST
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Sorry for your loss.
Very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Forever Young
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 11:35:45 PM AEST
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Time and unforseen occurrences befall all mankind the Bible says. We are at the wrong place at the wrong time.....or time finally catches us with us and we die old.
Beautifully written poem Christina. This must have been so hard on your nephew and your family.......I can just imagine how hard it is on this young man's family.
Your words were a source of comfort I'm sure
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Re: Forever Young
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 10:03:52 PM AEST
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| Christina, this was a wonderful dedication to your nephews friend. May God bless you and yours. *S* Cynthia |
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 10:42:16 PM AEST
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ohhh very sad, so young....... christina this was beautifully and lovingly written, my heart goes out to all of you, so sorry for your loss, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Forever Young
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:02:48 PM AEST
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| Huggs Christina..A beautiful poem and wonderful tribute...He's smiling I'm sure...Russ |
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