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too young for this pain
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:35:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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ther's a little girl who's crying indside
there's a little girl who wants to die
she wishes and prays
for the pain to stop
but mommy ran away
and daddy needs her love
she wishes and prays
that he'll find a new hobby
so maybe he wont need the little girls loving.
theres a little girl crying
cause daddy came home
went up too her room
and played a little toon
but the toon she did not like
she despises it each time
theres a little girl crying
cause she lost her way
she ran away from her house
and doesn't no where to stay
theres a little girl crying
but not tears of pain
she's crying cause she escaped
the daddy that she hates
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Re: too young for this pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:56:13 AM AEST
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| THIS IS SO WELL WRITTEN -I LOVE IT AND I UNDERSTAND -I WAS ONCE THE LITTLE GIRL FROM WHICH DADDY NEEDED LOVE- |
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Re: too young for this pain
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:33:45 PM AEST
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| Man This Is Very Touching. I Hope It's Daddy Loving In A Good Way And Not In A Bad Way. You're Very Good Writing Poetry. |
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