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first you crawl
Contributed by
reprobate
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:33:41 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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You stand, you take a chance
You breath, you feel the pain
You take a step and start again
Life gives you love, pure and clean
Love gives you life, harsh and mean
Give up either and you have neither
You sleep, rest renews and refreshes
You wake, the world burns in your eyes
You, body and soul, are lost in the ashes
Go ahead, you need to take that step
Go out, feel the world and be reborn
Give, get, live, love and forget.
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Re: first you crawl
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by bernard on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:38:36 AM AEST
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Top marks for this very positive poem. I enjoyed my read, Thanks from,
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Re: first you crawl
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by kandis on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:08:54 AM AEST
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I really like this. It definitely inspires me.
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Re: first you crawl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:28:52 PM AEST
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Yes, Mike, one foot in front of the other, over and over again until you reach your destination. Each one is as important as the last. This is quite inspirational. Good for you.
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