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dribble 140504
Contributed by
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 08:39:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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dribble red
your hearts' sweat
pain in your mind
not in your wrist
hold me close
feel my muscles go limp
cry over my face
knowing its the best way
uncureable disease
that disease is me
let me slip away
before i destroy more than just you
beyond your tears
beyond your realisation
dribbling, peacefully
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Re: dribble 140504
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:07:34 AM AEST
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BRILLIANT
CAPTIVATING
I LOVE IT
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Re: dribble 140504
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by apollo on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:49:27 AM AEST
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truly captivating that is for sure. "before i destroy more than just you" that is quite moving, very thoughtful and clever. really loved reading this and imagining this.
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Re: dribble 140504
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by dark-princess-of-Avalon on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:40:23 PM AEST
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| Your poem is sad but it makes people see the pain you feel.I love it, |
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Re: dribble 140504
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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| Absorbing, compelling and powerful. Three words apt for the description of this disturbing and tragic poem. |
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