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Not sharing
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:54:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ever wonder if Time is as it should be
When you look into my eyes
Do you really see right through me
I am just scared about Life and Dying
At times I wish I could just wish it all away
But you could n't do it all
The world,or at least, my World is so confussing
My Thoughts are spining around
From joy to sorrow
As I weave in and out
I am silence not sharing
Keeping my thoughts to my self
Fear .
No ,Not really
Just patiently waiting
As Each Day Ticks Bye.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-05-14 01:54:56]
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Re: Not sharing
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:18:56 AM AEST
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| i can relate to this alot, you just described how i feel so well that its creepy. a brilliant write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Not sharing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 05:39:13 AM AEST
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wow!!!
that's really good you know!!!
like lost_in_myself said he can relate to this quite well, I'm sure many others can too..
it's a very common feeling aint it?
okay i really really loved your poem.
it was well-written and captured a feeling extremely well, in a way most can relate to.
i think the flow was pretty good i suppose, but the imagery of nothing really---just thoughts---well i like that type of imagery..
poems like this evoke different emotions in different people...
magnificent poem!!!
13 year old girl who is dreadfully sorry for taking up too much room hehe,
Katie |
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