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Forget I exist
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:08:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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“Forget I exist”
By: Danielle
You were a flame so perfect and tame
I use to appreciate it
when I would say your name
I didn’t think it turn out like this
So heartbroken without any bliss
You encountered me sweetly
So mach and cool
To tell you the truth
You seemed like a fool
But I was drawn toward you, and now I’m so far
Bring me closer, back in your car
Take me to a secluded beach
Somewhere that I can’t be reached
Give me the moon, give me the stars
I don’t want to see your shameful scars
You encountered me sweetly
So macho and cool
To tell you the truth
You seemed like a fool
I want to forget you, not know you exist
I love you it hurts like a hit with a fist
Don’t tell me you love me, don’t say my name
Forget I exist, forget were the same
I wanna receive a call that say your in a coma
I want you to forget I exist
You encountered me sweetly
So macho and cool
To tell you the truth…
I think I love you
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Living_In_My_Dream
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Re: Forget I exist
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by Another_Dimension on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:09:35 AM AEST
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| Oh dear, you love him yet you'd like him to be in a coma, this isnt usually lol. honestly. I'm not yet sure if it's a bad thing *coughs* probably a bad thing though. i really liked this one 2 x |
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Re: Forget I exist
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:00:53 PM AEST
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| "i love you it hurts like a hit with a fist" i couldnt hav put it better myself. great poem xxx |
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Re: Forget I exist
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:47:49 PM AEST
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| wow...I can totally relate. love can be the best and worst feeling in the world....sometimes at the same time. I feel the same way. great write. |
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Re: Forget I exist
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:10:39 PM AEST
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THIS WAS THE GAY POEM THAT GOT ME PUBLISHED...LOL I DONT LIKE IT BUT I GUESS THEY DID...
MUCH LOVE,
DANI |
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