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Cut

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



“Cut”
By: Danielle

Sitting down on your couch
We started snuggling and making out
You slipped your hand across my cheek,
You made my knees feel so damn weak
I took your shirt off,
Grabbed your hand
All of a sudden you got mad
It took me a while to figure out
What this whole thing was about
You slit your wrist,
Think it’s no big deal
I finally say this can’t be real
You seemed so perfect,
So figured out
I guess I didn’t know what you were really about
What happened to the nights before?
You would kiss me outside your door
I thought I knew you guess not anymore
I finally say were moving to way fast
You say wait c’mon it’s all in the past
Why didn’t you tell me all this before?
I thought I knew you guess not anymore
You slit your wrist
Think it’s no big deal
I finally say this can’t be real
You seemed so perfect
So figured out
I guess I didn’t know what you were really about





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Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:04:05 AM AEST
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this flows together really well. YOu've done a good job with the imgary, I can see this happening. The emotion is there too. Well done.


Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:32:55 AM AEST
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Deep. to some people that pain is whats real to them, and what they are really about. great poem.A+++


Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:32:07 PM AEST
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'you seemed so perfect
so figured out'
i love that line!


Re: Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:28:22 PM AEST
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I love it. its soo well written and detailed. great great write. you have a gift




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