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Happinessism
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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It takes time to rhyme
And crime does pay
But doing time and rhyming crime
Only waist my time to rhyme
I do not know of what to say
And to say what isn't true is false
So I'll stick to what I know to say
And that is what I know is true
My life, so full of of sights and glee
It's almost too much for me to see
But life is great so never hate
But love and see the great in me
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lifefliesby
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2004-05-13 20:38:52]
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Re: Happinessism
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:58:33 PM AEST
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| Good write! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Happinessism
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:13:09 PM AEST
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*grins*
Nicely written. Made me smile and has a pretty good flow. Good job.
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Re: Happinessism
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:51:34 PM AEST
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Mildly confusing, but it expresses the thought flow really adequately.
Great write
Bravo!!!
Encore!!!
Love,
Chels |
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