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FEELings
Contributed by
Brians_sweety
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:21:24 PM in AEST
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The FEELings I have are sometimes unbareible
all I do is wish for you by my side
I have never had this FEELing for anyone
and truthfully its scary
you have so much controle over me
just because of my FEELings
FEELings are so great yet.....so mistreating
I get mad at you but can t be for long
because I am afraid of loosing you
why?
FEELings
you get mad at me all I do is try and try to fix it
why?
FEELings
I m so scared of loosing you because I don't want to FEEL the pain it will bring.
all I do is FEEL for you
which is both good and bad
I hope you know I love you and I never want to be without you
and I hope you FEEL the same
please don t crush me because it will hurt
and I don t want to FEEL pain.
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Re: FEELings
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:26:03 PM AEST
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Very powerful, raw, emotional, poignant . . . always good characteristics of a poem :-). I liked the way you capitalized "FEEL" every time the word was used . . . accented it nicely, in my opinion.
Just *one* thing-- no offense meant at all, but maybe you'd benefit from using spell check on Word? Or maybe you could click on the thing right before you submit your poem that asks the mods to edit your work . . . ?
Just a suggestion. Spelling errors detract from a wonderful poem.
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Re: FEELings
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:46:11 PM AEST
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Sorta Sad But Written So Well !!!
You Know Me & You FEEL The Same Way About Our BoyFriends I'm So Much In Love With This Guy Ron But I'm So Scared All The Time Of Loosing Him Simply Cause Of The Pain It Brings !! My Heart Has Been Broken So Many Times Its Not Even Funny Any More !!
That Poem I Wrote Was An Old One But I Failed To Put That In There !! Thank You So Much For Your Comment !!!
Hugs,Love & God Bless :-)
LoVe - AnGeL |
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