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My Mistake
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pyrofungus
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:06:44 PM in AEST
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A mistake swollen full of hatred
Hatred for myself
Unforgiving mistakes
That's all I bring
I'm always messing up
I can't think straight anymore
Unknown to all that surrounds me
Held captive in my mindless threats
Cruelty to myself
Floating ever so low
I was shot down and buried alive
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Re: My Mistake
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:12:41 PM AEST
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Whoa . . . nicely put and I hope things start looking up for you. Feel free to email, IM, or PM me if you ever need to talk :).
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Re: My Mistake
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by Drive_By on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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"Anger is just like a black wind that blows out the candle of the mind." ~ Anonymous
"When angry, act not. When you act, do not be angry." ~ Japanese saw |
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Re: My Mistake
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by jenna on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 08:17:12 PM AEST
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| great piece |
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