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Petals
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:41:06 PM in AEST
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Your words are like petals,
They're so intoxicating at first,
Yet when the scents fade away,
For affection it desperately thrists.
Your words are like petals,
It divinely captivates the heart,
But when it's grasped between two hands,
It slowly falls apart.
Your words are like petals,
They bloom only for a while,
Yet as time slowly moves on,
It withers out and dies.
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blueheart
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Re: Petals
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:54:27 PM AEST
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You sure got that petal placed right. I have know several people like this.
Rita |
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Re: Petals
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:58:52 PM AEST
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Oooh, liked the simile muchly . . . great imagery; I especially enjoyed the second stanza.
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Re: Petals
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by UnfallenTears on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:17:40 PM AEST
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| I really like this one. Very well written. Your talent for writing is very obvious here, nice work. |
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Re: Petals
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:48:35 PM AEST
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| This is really nice. I can feel your emotions being poured out in this write. Great work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Petals
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:58:49 PM AEST
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Wow..this could not have been said any better..
I love the analogy used here.... Terrific write.
Jenni |
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Re: Petals
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:00:50 PM AEST
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Wow Very Good Write !!!!!!! Loved It :-) I've Also Known Alot Of People Like This !!!!!!!!!!!!
*********LoVe**AnGeL***********
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Re: Petals
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by waos on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:35:03 PM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: Petals
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
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excellent, hanna, your style, images and deep message; poetry at its finest:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Petals
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:08:50 AM AEST
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| nice: Poem of Petals.. you have captured a word on a wing: lovey write... |
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Re: Petals
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:47:10 AM AEST
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A amsterpeice of truth unfortunaly at times.
Great writing!
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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