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Another Year
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:31:10 PM in AEST
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All of my 19 years are cascading through time,
Brimming me with cherished memories sublime,
Another year that had me soaring to the stars,
Another year that left me with inevitable scars.
Like a butterfly whose wings have now fully grown,
I'm equipped to take flight into the world unknown,
New encounters and dreams remain straight ahead,
Acquired maturity will guide me as I tread.
Poignant times have dwelled and tested my strength,
Yet in those moments have surfaced true friends,
Another year has gone and I bade it farewell,
Hopefully next year there'll be more that I can tell.
~ 14th May 2004 ~
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Re: Another Year
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by UnfallenTears on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:49:15 PM AEST
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| Very nice write... good work. |
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Re: Another Year
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:02:47 PM AEST
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Let me wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! Hope you have a great one. Nineteen, gosh, I don't think I can remember back that far. lol
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Another Year
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:10:52 PM AEST
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Happy birthday, blueheart! May it be a good one.
Nice poem. I liked the line about inevitable scars . . . every year we start anew, knowing that we're most definitely going to encounter those scar-makers-- but we're also going to be "soaring to the stars". Amazing what a year can hold, and doubly amazing that you managed to capture such in this :).
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Re: Another Year
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:58 PM AEST
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| happy birthday... i didnt know u were only 19 i thought u were older... wow im so happy to see all the younger ppl here like me... im only 20 and it good not to feel like an odd ball.. :) :) :) |
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Re: Another Year
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:55:03 PM AEST
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Well Happy Birth Day And Many More To Come !!!!! LoL And I Thought I Was Young I'm 21 !!!!!!!!!!!!!
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Another Year
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:55:37 PM AEST
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Wow...to be 19 again!! Trying to recall that..lol..
Great reflective write. You have told your tale beautifully...
HAPPY, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Blueheart..may you see many more happy years..
Hugs and balloons..
Jenn |
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Re: Another Year
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:43:41 AM AEST
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~singing: *happy birthday to you!! happy birthday to you!! happy birthday dear hanna!! happy birthday to you!!!* what a wonderful poem filled with so many things, may all your dreams come true!! now and always!! dear friend:) big hugs, big love, nessa
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Re: Another Year
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:56:48 AM AEST
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| I ran as fast as I could. I know I'm late. *holds out arms wide open* HAPPY BIRTHDAY I liked this write. Although it was sad, it was still a nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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